Friday 25 March 2011

Little Red Riding Hood

We have been practising our speech marks.  Here is my example.

Little Red Riding Hood opened the door to Grandma’s house, when suddenly rats come out of the house and they were going somewhere.
“Man, grandma needs to clean up this place,” said Little Red Riding Hood. “Flip, Grandma sure does need to get some lights in here.”
Red Riding Hood went into the kitchen.   “Pooh, what’s that smell?” she said  to her Grandmother, who was standing in the kitchen.
“Oh, hello,  dear that was just my oven.  The cookies must be ready,” said Grandma.
“I just came to tell you  I got first in the judo to tournament and I got a gold medal,” said Little Red Riding Hood. 
By Jayden

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